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Yes, you definitely handled the line breaks well - it certainly added to the rhythmic nature of the poem. The way I perceived the poem, it had a strong rhythm, ...

You did certainly dabble with sweetness over the whole vulgarity of the poem. I enjoyed it, really, in a sick sort of way. Which, I suppose, is the main point ...

The point was sort of repeated and such, but all in all it was one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read - it had rhythm, it was beautiful ...

This poem did not have anything artistic to it. It was more or an emotional rant than anything, and by the time I got down to the part about the ...

I agree that in ther beginning it appeared to me that you were going to rhyme and then changed your mind. Also, the poem, as a whole, seemed very scattered ...

This was bland and relatively cliche. I Let It Go In May, I'd Love To It One More Time, Those lines seemed rather awkward and a little forced. The poem ...

This was very well written and I understand how hard it is to make something sound impressive with such limited means and complicated rhyme pattern. All in all, under all ...

This was a fairly good poem, but it was repetitive and a bit cliche. I mean, it had the average "god is beautiful" and "the world is beautiful" but it ...

This is a very sweet poem that, while it was fair, did not blow me away. The first stanza is far by the best, and the rest of the stanza's ...

This has amazing potential. It is a bit crowded, in a sense - there are many words that sort of compress the meaning. But, all in all, I would not ...

This sounds very interesting and it was short, but well written. The character, on the other hand, I see conflicts with. She is already the typical, cliche gothic character. And, ...

Well, this was excruciatingly crude, but rated fairly for it. I don't...exactly...follow it. I get the whole part about taking a shit and fucking family members, but not much else. ...

Well, this is a very good poem, at first. It was well organized and probably more artistic then anything I've ever written. But, while the words in the parentheses were ...